It was the most romantic place I had ever seen. I loved him more than ever; marveled at his thoughtfulness. All stayed well for less than twenty-four hours. That’s when they arrived.
I now marvel at his naivety, in believing that I would have loved a surprise party; with relatives – on our first anniversary!!!
Microfiction in response to MicroMondays hosted by Varad.
This week’s prompt: “All stayed well for less than twenty-four hours.”
Word count: 54
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Haha. I loved all the twists and turns in that little story!
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Thank you, Namratha!
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Ouch! Poor guy’s gonna be hearing about it for the rest of his life
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🙂 Thanks Varad.
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You tell us a great deal in 54 words, and all expressed so beautifully too!
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Thank you so much, Penny!
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