PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Rajiv let his camera feast on the dilapidated building; like an uncut gem, jutting out from the polished glass of the neighborhood.
Satisfied, he approached the watchman to satiate his own curiosity.
“Say. How come this place isn’t a mall yet?”
“Some court case Sir.”
“I see. When did this factory close?”
“I am told, about 30 years back.”
“Wow! Why don’t they settle? Seems like an awful waste of time and money.”
“I wouldn’t know sir.”
“Sure. Thank you.”
Rajiv turned back. He knew. Land and money seldom caused battles. The same though, couldn’t be said about men’s pride.
Flash fiction in response to Friday Fictioneers hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff.
This is often true—though money usually wons out.😄
Good story.
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Money… yes. 🙂
Thank you, Christine!
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Sell up, take the money, move on, be happy. That’s my advice!
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Yes. Very true. Sorry for the late response!
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That’s a shrewd observation, Fluid Phrase.
I like the way the camera ‘feasts’, and the photographer ‘satiates’ his curiosity.
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I totally agree with Penny. Great lines!!!
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you, Penny! Sorry for the late response.
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I’m with pennygadd–“feast” and “satiate” are wonderful words here. Good take.
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Thank you so much!
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Dear FP,
Man’s pride always precedes his downfall. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle! Please pardon me for the late response.
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That’s so true. The last line.
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Thank you, JJ!
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A real world take.
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Thank you so much!
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The last two sentences are fantastic.
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Very astute observation FP – pride and ego are at the root of all evil, along with an overwhelming desire for power. Money is just a tool to attain and fan these.
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Glad you liked this Dahlia! Your kind words are always encouraging. Thank you!
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