“It is unlike him to be so late. Perhaps something came up at work… I don’t want to look all so desperate by calling him repeatedly. He’ll come. No point getting angry; spoiling my mood and the day.
Just need something to kill time.”
Namitha fished her sunglasses from her purse and perched it carefully on the coffee cup.
“Pffft. Balancing that took all of 40 seconds… Am bored…”
Looking around the coffee shop for some relief, she was greeted by Amit’s smiling face, camera dangling from his neck.
“Hey beautiful!”
“You are late. I should be angry.”
“But you aren’t” he smirked. “Besides, I am not late.”
“Excuse me! It’s 7:15. You were supposed to be here an hour earlier.”
“And I was! Here, look.”
He showed her the pictures on his camera – pictures of her sipping coffee absentmindedly, flipping her phone, staring into the window serenely, and much more.
“Oh my! I never knew I could look like this.”
“I wanted to show you how I see you… Happy anniversary dear.”
Flash fiction in response to FFfAW hosted by Priceless Joy.
I am usually terrible at attempts at romance. This is one of the few. Please pardon my transgression!
Lovely spin. Wonderful take.
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Seriously?! Thank you. so much! 🙂
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Yes!
and welcome. 🙂
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Original 😀
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Thank you so much! Encouraging me into writing romance 😉
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Hahahaha! He was on time for their date but took pictures of her instead. I think I would be mad. Great story!
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Thank you, PJ!
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Ah, so sweet. I was worried at first something sinister might happed – assumed your title was stalker related! – but to read such a sweet story was a pleasure
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Haha! Glad you liked it. Thank you, Lynn!
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My pleasure 🙂
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I’m glad she thought it romantic and wasn’t annoyed that he left her sitting there for an hour! Sweet story 🙂
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Thank you, Iain!
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Amit obviously knew her very well, knew that she would be patient and look beautiful while waiting, knew she would love the photos that he took – knew that she wasn’t very observant and wouldn’t notice him sneaking around taking pix! What a lovely anniversary present – the gift of who you are in your beloved’s eyes!
Lovely story, Fluid Phrase!
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Thank you, Penny! That’s very perceptive of you! Yes. Exactly. He knew it and thought of the unique gift! 🙂
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Such a sweet story. Well done.
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Thank you for the kind words 🙂
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