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Her excitement slowly melted into contentment as she walked the cobblestone streets, weaving her way to the sea. She had finally done it and on such a momentous day she felt the grace of the hot summer sun shimmering against bright blue skies. She couldn’t have asked for more.
On reaching, she sat completely absorbed by the sea she so loved, feeling blessed and grateful. In the quest for peace, she had discovered herself at last. She did not need the crutch of his love if the price was her self-respect. She now had faith – in herself and in God.
Word Count: 100
Flash fiction in response to Friday Fictioneers hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff.
A wonderful tale of self-discovery and contentment. Delightful
Please click to read my FriFic
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Thank you so much!
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Dear Fluid Phrase,
She’s in the best place to be. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you! Yes. I feel happy for her too.
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A happy ending–and an important one. Realizing you can be perfectly fine without the person who has hurt you. Nice job.
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Thank you! Finding strength on her own terms was what I liked too 🙂
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Very empowering. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Good for her, Men shouldn’t be the only solution. Just a great story! Nan
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I completely agree with you. Thank you!
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A lovely piece. It had a peaceful feel that matched it’s message.
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Thank you! This is so encouraging.
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Good for her.
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Thank you! Yes. I am happy for her.
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She did not need the crutch of his love if the price was her self-respect. She now had faith – in herself and in God. Beautiful lines and extremely well written.
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Thank you so much! Your kind words are very encouraging.
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beautifully-written piece. i couldn’t ask for more.
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Thank you for the kind words 🙂
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Glad she has found her inner strength. She doesn’t need him. Well written!
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Thank you!
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